The Sword's song is a sad song,
He pipes it soft and low,
"I would ply a gentler trade,
But War is all i know,
And though my blade be cold and jagged,
And unloved by many,
I would ply this trade of mine,
'Till doom or death take me".
And so the Sword would sing his song,
The song thats soft and low,
"I would ply a gentler trade,
But War i all i know..."
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Add in some notes and more words, and you have a score to a musical. Your poem sounds like a theatre script, no kidding.
Ooh, write a musical about me. ^_^
[thwen] thanks. maybe someday i just might do that... ;)
[john]
WAAA???!! About you? what about this...? =P
*there once was a tank with a very long gun,
a very long gun had he,
he shot many blanks,
but always said thanks,
to the lass who dared bed thee....
>;P
(arbitrary juggernaut): Too much, too much!
What are you thinking? XD
Song of the sword.. I heard about that before
;D
Too much is never enough... >;P
Of course you have bert' this was one of my first works as a wannabe poet... ;P
i agree with huiwen.. it does sound lyk a rip-off from a play. perhaps given some time. u could come up with a whole act on dis 1 =)
Rip-off eh?
. . .
Yea im kinda workin on it... ;)